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- Thread starter FireFall2024
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Hey Fleuster!
Thanks for submitting!
Unfortunately, this map is REJECTED.
The theme is unoriginal, as we have the map "Cheese" which consists of cheese (and coincidentally rats) already.
The build itself is a good start! It looks like cheese, and has some texture. The cheese knives are creative as well. You can add more texture and perhaps built both builds at angles to give the simple build more depth.
The parkour is floating, and also repetitive and varying in difficulty. There are some jumps that do not fit an easy. The parkour needs to be closer to the build and varying in jumps. Use more variation such as slimes, glass panes, heads, cocoa beans, trapdoors, daylight sensors, vines, water, ice, etc. to space out your variation more!
We hope to see more maps from you in the future!
Good luck!
Zaba
Thanks for submitting!
Unfortunately, this map is REJECTED.
The theme is unoriginal, as we have the map "Cheese" which consists of cheese (and coincidentally rats) already.
The build itself is a good start! It looks like cheese, and has some texture. The cheese knives are creative as well. You can add more texture and perhaps built both builds at angles to give the simple build more depth.
The parkour is floating, and also repetitive and varying in difficulty. There are some jumps that do not fit an easy. The parkour needs to be closer to the build and varying in jumps. Use more variation such as slimes, glass panes, heads, cocoa beans, trapdoors, daylight sensors, vines, water, ice, etc. to space out your variation more!
We hope to see more maps from you in the future!
Good luck!
Zaba
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