Rejected Chocolate bar map Easy-Medium

[Zigard]

The name of the map is Chocolate bar
The difficulty is easy or medium
There is 36 jumps
It was created by me and Skolyx78
To visit it do /plot visit Zigard 1
There is 3 checkpoints (including start)

 

[Zigard]

There is 3 checkpoints including start

 

[daniel.]

i don't see how this is a chocolate bar.. anyway, too hard for easy, repetitive jumps mostly so might want to change that. not appealing to look at, not something i would consider playing, might want to improve on a few things and then it could possibly get accepted.

 

[Zigard]

Well this is a chocolate bar

 

[Smxthie]

it looks like hot chocolate spilled over a black mug with no handle, as Steph said the jumps are repetitive overall a bad map sorry bud

 

[Zigard]

All the jumps are repetitive: I did many easy maps and I think it's not really repetitive compared with the other maps

 

[Txilsy]

Hello there,

Thanks for submitting your map! I've come to inform you that this map will be rejected.

The theme is decently original but the build isn't that great. It doesn't represent the theme well either. The jumps are, like others mentioned, repetitive and there isn't too much variety overall. I'd also suggest finding a balance between the amount and the difficulty of jumps. For next time, I'd say for you to focus more on the build, since that is what needs the most attention, judging off this map.

Thanks again for submitting, we'd love to see another map sometime soon, so don't hesitate on making and submitting another one. :)

Also, if you have any questions or concerns, just PM me here on the forums or on Discord.

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