Rejected Chocolate Milk-resubmission

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Libby3512
Map Name- Chocolate Milk
Plot owner name-Libby3512 Plot ID- 44; -106
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The original feedback was mostly positive except for the length of the map, so I extended the map into the milk carton as well as the glass.
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Uneasilly // Sil

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Hey Libby3512,

Unfortunately, I'm gonna have to reject your resubmission.

Like I said in my review of the original submission, the theme is original and the build looks decent. The length of your map now fits the hard difficult better than it did before. However, it's overall a bit too easy, and many jumps would fit the medium difficulty better. You still have several floating jumps that you haven't implemented into the build yet, that make the build look a bit messy. Even though the jumps you added to the carton are somewhat enjoyable, they're not really implemented into the build as they're all floating in the carton, just hidden so it doesn't look messy from the outside. You can also easily skip the last few fence jumps at the end since you can just walk up the fences: https://prnt.sc/uxtydn (red = skip)

Thank you for submitting this map, I'd love to see more maps from you!
Have a great day,
Sil
 
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