Rejected Christmas Tree - Hard Parkour Map - Walter_The_King, H00DRA

[Walter_The_King]

Username(s): Walter_The_King, H00DRA

Map Name: Christmas Tree

Plot #1, "/plot visit Walter_The_King"

Difficulty: Hard

Jumps: 64

Description: Take a journey through a detailed representation of a real life Christmas tree. Parkour your way through snow and leaves alike on your way to complete this amazing hard parkour map. Good luck, have fun!

 

[Acrellux]

Username(s): Walter_The_King, H00DRA

Map Name: Christmas Tree

Plot #1, "/plot visit Walter_The_King"

Difficulty: Hard

Jumps: 64

Description: Take a journey through a detailed representation of a real life Christmas tree. Parkour your way through snow and leaves alike on your way to complete this amazing hard parkour map. Good luck, have fun!

Um I don't mean to be offensive but I suggest you don't put the word amazing in your own description if you made the map xd

Feedback!
Build: Looks pretty good.
Parkour: The parkour looks repetitive with just ladders, heads, snow, blocks, and nothing else.

My rating: Build: 7/10, Parkour: 3/10, total: 4.5/10

 

[Tas]

Please make sure your theme is original before you commit to building. There is already a Christmas Tree map that has basically the same build. Good luck with future submissions.

 

[Walter_The_King]

Um I don't mean to be offensive but I suggest you don't put the word amazing in your own description if you made the map xd

Feedback!
Build: Looks pretty good.
Parkour: The parkour looks repetitive with just ladders, heads, snow, blocks, and nothing else.

My rating: Build: 7/10, Parkour: 3/10, total: 4.5/10

Yeah your right, idk what I was doin putting "amazing" in my description, oh well. This is my first parkour map I've ever made so I don't really expect it to get accepted, but you gotta start somewhere :/

My next one will be 10 X BETTER!

 

[k_rissy]

Hello Walter_The_King,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is unoriginal, as we already have a map with this same theme (ChristmasTree.) Before creating a map, please make sure that the theme has not already been done before by going here and clicking the google doc in the thread: https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/
The build is accurate to what you were going for, with some details to be seen.
The parkour is a bit repetitive within each section, so make sure you incorporate different jump styles throughout your entire map! The length of this course is good for the hard difficulty; however, the difficulty of the jumps was better suited for a medium.

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina