Rejected Cloud parkour

[Jeremys556]

Hello,this is the new parkour submission of my new parkour map!Well,lets get to the details.
Map maker and tester:Jeremys556
Difficulty:Easy
Other stuff:The preasure plates r posed to give you gems then take you to the Parkour spawn
Warp:/warp Cloudpk
[DOUBLEPOST=1437947056][/DOUBLEPOST]Oh yeah,heres the screenshot!

 

[Pud96]

on the pictures there is wite wool not coulds if you could change the wool and make coulds would be better

 

[Billybo10000]

Rejected!

We already have a parkour based around clouds on the server, literally called Cloud Parkour on hard.

Other than that, there was no distinct theme. The four sections of the course were random and did not make sense, especially "The End" bit, where you didn't even have the correct block underneath the pressure plate at the end. You need either a green (Easy), Yellow (Medium) or Red (Hard) wool block under any final pressure plates.

Also, try to refrain from calling various sections of your parkour "Levels". The entire course is meant to be it's own level, and unless it works thematically with a story line (Which needs to be well thought out), it cannot happen.

~ Billy

 

[The_Jazzy_Man]

IT was a bit confusing, but it had nice design aspects, so overall it was just alright.