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Loading Status...Rejected Clown- By piebrian5 Medium
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Unfortunately, there's already a clown map, which is "Clown" in Easy by Couchism and Bluepearl2000. You can check all parkour maps in Shinxray's parkour list, which I've linked below (it's also in my signature)! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lZKQZMgGev6fXyhZ8nCPkTzNIj0yOjXjUTDvfzKNzl4/mobilebasic
Hey piebrian5,
I'm sorry to have to tell you that your map has been REJECTED. Although there is a clown-themed map already ("Clown (Easy)"), as MCBYT said, both builds are vastly different and it's clear this is more of a Pennywise-themed map, so it is original, well done! The main issues lie in with the build and parkour. The build, as you were told before, is quite simple, lacking in depth and shape. Although we see your effort, we don't see much improvement and the build still falls quite flat. The parkour difficulty and length definitely fit the medium difficulty, good job! The problem with the PK is the variation. There were a lot of ladder jumps, just by looking at the front of the build you can see the amount of them. Remember to use different blocks and jumps in the future to make your parkours entertaining and varied. I hope to see more submissions from you!
p.s There was also an impossible jump here:
I'm sorry to have to tell you that your map has been REJECTED. Although there is a clown-themed map already ("Clown (Easy)"), as MCBYT said, both builds are vastly different and it's clear this is more of a Pennywise-themed map, so it is original, well done! The main issues lie in with the build and parkour. The build, as you were told before, is quite simple, lacking in depth and shape. Although we see your effort, we don't see much improvement and the build still falls quite flat. The parkour difficulty and length definitely fit the medium difficulty, good job! The problem with the PK is the variation. There were a lot of ladder jumps, just by looking at the front of the build you can see the amount of them. Remember to use different blocks and jumps in the future to make your parkours entertaining and varied. I hope to see more submissions from you!
p.s There was also an impossible jump here:
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