Rejected Crimson Monolith - Hard

[Sasqki]

Hello there! This is the first parkour map I have ever submitted or displayed anywhere, so I would love if someone could check it out and tell me what they think. Do let me know if anything is confusing or if anything could be improved, plot, build or parkour-wise. Hope you guys enjoy.

USERNAME: Sasqki
MAP NAME: Crimson Monolith
MAP ID: 137;-12
MAP WARP: /plot visit Sasqki 1
DIFFICULTY: Hard
NUMBER OF JUMPS: 94
NUMBER OF CHECKPOINTS: 9

 

[sapqhire]

Hello Sasqki,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is somewhat original, there are quite a few tower themed maps, but none like this which is good. The build is good, it's got a lot of detail and has been built well!
The parkour is very repetitive, as it was mainly regular jumps and ladders. Try to experiment with a larger variety of blocks and items when building parkour, as well as experimenting with how you utilize them, as this will make your map more fun to complete.
The path was very confusing at times, try to include more directional signs, or adding coloured carpets throughout to point you in the right direction.
The difficulty is good for a medium, but the map is far too long. Please refer to this wiki article, to make sure your map fits in to the requirements.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.