Rejected DeepOceanFish-Medium

[FireWolf1985]

Map Name: Rolling In The Deep
Creator: FireWolf1985
Jumps: 44
Checkpoints: 4
/plot v FireWolf1985 1

 

[sophiaaah <3]

-1
-theme unclear
-the parkour is repetivie
-no main build

 

[Blurpyfied]

-1
-theme unclear
-the parkour is repetivie
-no main build

repetitivie

 

[FireWolf1985]

ok ill change the pk so its less repetitive

 

[FireWolf1985]

i hopefully just made it less repetative

 

[Blurpyfied]

Hello, I'm going to give you a -1.

~ Wrong Facing, Easies should be facing X
~ Parkour has some skips, and is not the greatest.
~Build needs work

 

[FireWolf1985]

its not easy its medium

 

[sophiaaah <3]

-1
there are already several fish maps

 

[FireWolf1985]

oh rly but are those deep sea fish maps

 

[sophiaaah <3]

oh rly but are those deep sea fish maps

it doesnt matter, there are several ocean/fish/underwater maps

 

[FireWolf1985]

the fact theres several means only one is original then

 

[sophiaaah <3]

the fact theres several means only one is original then

the idea has to be different in order to fall into the original category. there are several underwater maps and yours isnt very different from them

 

[FireWolf1985]

its deep sea so its different

 

[sophiaaah <3]

its deep sea so its different

its really not, its still an ocean theme

 

[k_rissy]

Hello FireWolf1985,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
Your theme is indeed unoriginal, to clear that up. A general underwater theme, like you have submitted, has been done before. Please remember to check the list of all the maps here (I also encourage you to look at the build in-game as well.)
As far as the build goes, if you are going for "deep ocean fish," I would call this inaccurate. If you were building a fish map (which we would now refrain you from doing), the fish should be the main focus. That isn't the case here. The structures that are present within your build are also very small and lacking in detail. Try to have one or two structures be a main focus for your map.
The parkour does have some variety throughout, so well done here! However, the difficulty is quite inconsistent. For example, this section is way trickier than the rest of your parkour (these jumps do not belong on a medium map.)

http://imgur.com/S9fEVfB

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!