You can overjump this chain. Also, there's two chains right at the start which feels a bit redundant.
There really isn't a great way to get momentum here.
This chain needs to be nerfed.
This x-facing jump needs to be adjusted.
Headhitter here feels unnecessary.
This is very easy to overshoot, either adjust or add a better strat sign.
Momentum is also unclear here.
The pane to flower needs to be adjusted; the landing could be bigger.
Landing here also needs to be increased.
the head -> head jump needs a nerf (you can also do a 1.16 skip here.