Rejected Diamond Demon Parkour (Edited) 35 jumps, 2 checkpoints

[ummbrella6]

[DOUBLEPOST=1438107570][/DOUBLEPOST] It was built by me, ummbrella6 on my own and tested by me too. It is just diamonds and clouds going up to the DEMON and then jumps around the back of it through iron bars and up through ice and soulsand to the end. It was built on my 2nd plot (/plot visit ummbrella6 2)

Theme: Demon

 

[Nixi]

Why you have so many same pictures?

Looks ok map!

 

[ummbrella6]

Why you have so many same pictures?

Looks ok map!

Thanks

 

[Lamont]

The demon looks kinda lame no offence.try to put more design into it. I would put stone slabs on top and on the bottom of the diamond jumps but that's just me.

 

[ummbrella6]

The demon looks kinda lame no offence.try to put more design into it. I would put stone slabs on top and on the bottom of the diamond jumps but that's just me.

I know, this is my first map. The next maps I do will be better

 

[Lamont]

Why can't you do good now?

 

[ummbrella6]

Why can't you do good now?

Well, Basically, you said the demon was lame. I can accept that because it does look lame. But If it gets rejected I'll destroy it and possibly make one based on a neighborhood. Lets see if PokeZelda Accepts it...

 

[DaTNTBoy]

Well, Basically, you said the demon was lame. I can accept that because it does look lame. But If it gets rejected I'll destroy it and possibly make one based on a neighborhood. Lets see if PokeZelda Accepts it...

Don't think he will accept it.

 

[Billybo10000]

Your map has been rejected!

Reasons for this include:

• The theme made no sense. If it's a diamond demon, why is it made of netherrack? The design for the demon was also incredibly lackluster.
• The jumps were just random and you seemed not to care which blocks the jumps were made out of, which made the theme all the more confusing.

For a first map, it was not very good.

Some advice:

• Try to get some sense of what you want to design. Look up pictures, ask a player to help if you need to, just have some idea of how to make what you need without it being flat and dull.
• Stick to your theme. You have a theme for a reason, so the random clouds, soul sand and ice, really don't work with "Diamond Demon."
• Try picking a theme that doesn't constrict you to certain building materials.

Remember, you can always submit more maps at a later date.

~ Billy

 

[ummbrella6]

Yeah I knew it would get rejected even I thought the Demon was Poop