Rejected Dr. Kahl's Robot-Expert

[Juandacun]

Creators; Juandacun (builder and gameplay maker) and DionysosITheIGod (Gameplay maker and Tester)

Map Name: Dr. Kahl's Robot

Visit: /plot visit Juandacun 6

Difficulty: Expert

# of Jumps: 96

Other testers: Arc4Fer, CosmicWaves

 

[Udun]

I tested the first bit of this looks good! :D

 

[Nathanpls]

Hi,
I have some personal opinions and feedback for you on your map!

Note that I'm no map judge so my opinion won't affect if your map is accepted or rejected.

Parkour
The parkour was fun at points but there was too many neo jumps and very much "hug the wall games" in all the checkpoints.
It's also inconsistent in difficulty so going over the parkour again with another tester and getting more feedback is recommended from my side.
There was a point in the parkour where it was VERY diffcult to know where to go because it was so dark and so many signs everywhere which will throw the player off. (https://prnt.sc/131sdcb) My recommendation for this is either light up the place or make it failsafe before the jump to the ladder around the corner. (WHICH IS NOT EASY TO SEE)

Also this minecart doesn't need to have to blocks of rails. makes the jump unnecessary more diffciult considering it's the last jump before the cp would just be annyoing if a player fails it. (https://prnt.sc/131s39s)

I also found a few skips which can be seen here. (https://prntscr.com/131rw3e, https://prnt.sc/131s7f5)
Theme
There are a few bot maps already but none related to Dr. Kahl so good job on finding an original build idea!
Build
To me the build is boring and lacks very much details. Another thing about the robot is that there's just way too much unused space inside the robot. (https://prnt.sc/131sj9d, https://prnt.sc/131si0a)

Anyways good luck! :)

 

[Juandacun]

Hi,
I have some personal opinions and feedback for you on your map!

Note that I'm no map judge so my opinion won't affect if your map is accepted or rejected.

Parkour
The parkour was fun at points but there was too many neo jumps and very much "hug the wall games" in all the checkpoints.
It's also inconsistent in difficulty so going over the parkour again with another tester and getting more feedback is recommended from my side.
There was a point in the parkour where it was VERY diffcult to know where to go because it was so dark and so many signs everywhere which will throw the player off. (https://prnt.sc/131sdcb) My recommendation for this is either light up the place or make it failsafe before the jump to the ladder around the corner. (WHICH IS NOT EASY TO SEE)

Also this minecart doesn't need to have to blocks of rails. makes the jump unnecessary more diffciult considering it's the last jump before the cp would just be annyoing if a player fails it. (https://prnt.sc/131s39s)

I also found a few skips which can be seen here. (https://prntscr.com/131rw3e, https://prnt.sc/131s7f5)
Theme
There are a few bot maps already but none related to Dr. Kahl so good job on finding an original build idea!
Build
To me the build is boring and lacks very much details. Another thing about the robot is that there's just way too much unused space inside the robot. (https://prnt.sc/131sj9d, https://prnt.sc/131si0a)

Anyways good luck! :)

Ill make sure i fix those details, i just started building again so seeing those kinds of stuff from my POV is hard, o thank you fro your feedback :D

 

[Juandacun]

Some details of the map were added, here some screenshots:

This part got more light and its more clear where to go

and this jump got fallsafe protection as well

And last but not least, This jump got nerfed/buffed (up to you)

 

[Anacoustic]

Heyo Juandacun and Dio,

I'll be putting your map in ONGOING since I have tested and reviewed the map. This'll now go onto the other map judges for further reviewing. Please be patient while waiting on the status of your map.

If you have any concerns feel free to message me here or on discord at anA#8286.

Thank you, have a wonderful day !

-Ana

 

[Anacoustic]

Hi there Dio and Juan,

Im sorry to tell ya your map has been rejected.

The THEME is original for the map, so good on you for that !

The BUILD is quite undetailed and the robot is a bit on the boxier side. It caused the build to fall a bit flat when it came to reviewing it, and the head is a bit unbalanced compared to the body.

The PARKOUR fits the length of an expert map, but was extremely inconsistent and way too hard for an expert. The parkour became really unenjoyable near the end due to the repetitiveness and how inconsistent the parkour became.

Thank you for the submission, I hope to see more from you. Have a wonderful day !

-Ana