Rejected Dragon Skeleton - clqned

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Map Name: Dragon Skeleton
/Warp Clqned (/plot h clqned)
Difficulty: Medium
Jumps:46
Checkpoint:3
I think my map is a theme that no one hava never done, correct me if im wrong
 
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the jumps are too repetitive
 

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Name on mc:Clqned
Map Name:Dragon Skeleton
/Warp Clqned (/plot h clqned)
Difficulty: Medium
Jumps:46
Checkpoint:3
I think my map is a theme that no one hava never done, correct me if im wrong
Kinda funny how you meant to do Map name: Dragon but the : and D merged to make an emoji.. lol
 

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so i have to change them or i just have to redo the map
you can just redo the jumps (change them, no need in making a nother post!)
 

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Hello Clqned,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
I'd consider this theme original; we have dragon maps and skeleton maps, but none combining the two!
The build, however, is a bit plain and lacking in depth. Make sure you add more details throughout and also give it some more depth so it doesn't appear completely flat.
There is some variation throughout; however, it's a bit too much variety. Don't just add random blocks for no reason; try to integrate them with your theme or build. I'll link you a player-made thread that has some good advice on this: https://manacube.com/threads/basics-parkour-variance-and-self-constraint.78459/
The parkour also feels a bit inconsistent for the difficulty, overall being too hard for a medium.

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
 
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