Rejected Drop Point (UNSC) - Easy

[Aeris16]

If it gets accepted just call it "DropPoint".
30 Jumps, 2 CP
/plot v Aeris16 3
Easy Difficulty

Builds are based on models by Elcestrus (some random YouTuber), at least I am 90% sure because I built the models a few years ago on a different server and just now copied them over.

All things for Doob's sake of not having to hunt

• Pelican (big ahh ship in the sky)
• Mongoose + Turret Mongoose (the ground vehicles)
• Drop Pods (the things with the quartz parachutes)
• Mantis (the mech)

Theme is based on UNSC crafts and ships/weaponry systems. From the Halo MCC Universe.

Feature by sophia

 

[sophiaaah <3]

LMAO IM IN THE PIC

 

[Hayleyx]

Hello,

I shall be putting your map into ONGOING as I have tested and reviewed your map. Your map will now be discussed amongst other judges. Please be patient as this may take some time.

If you have any further questions, do not hesitate to start a conversation with me on the forums or message me on discord Hayleyxx.

 

[Hayleyx]

Hello,

Your map will be put in reviewing.
The theme is semi original as we already do have a lot of planes

The build does feel quite messy with a lot of things being around the build. This includes the floating parkour, which could be incorporated into the build further. The build does lack some detail due to how small the plane itself it is (for example, the underside).

There are a few minor parkour changes we would like to see. There are a few skips too. I have messaged you on discord with further details

Your will have until August 6th to make these changes or your map will be rejected.
If you have further questions, do not hesitate to message me on discord hayleyxx

Have a good day/night
-Hayley

 

[Hayleyx]

Hello!

Unfortunately, your map has been REJECTED.
The theme is original eve with other plane maps.

Due to the small size of the build, it looks quite overdetailed and would look better at a larger scale. Although you did make changes to the platform, it feels quite rushed.

The parkour itself is too hard for an easy, with a skip that skips half the map!


We hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Have a good day/night
-Hayley