Rejected Dungeon

[YellowStars]

*** Username? - YellowStars
*** Plot ID? - Do /plot home YellowStars 2
*** Screenshots of the map? - look and the bottom of the post
*** Rank? - Medium
*** Jumps? - Around 50
*** Builders? - Just this lonely guy named YellowStars

 

[ThePKFish]

Hello YellowStars! I have reviewed your parkour map and here is what I think! The build isn't very attractive. From the outside, it just looks like a big block of stone bricks. On the inside, it isn't very attractive either. There are also too many barriers, which are unnecessary and just stacked into a random wall in the front. The jumps aren't very unique, and they have been seen many times before. Good luck!

-Ashley (ThePKFish, fishy1980)

 

[Bugsnax]

i suppose ashley said most of the main points, and this course was a bit confusing for me as well!1 so yeah

 

[Txilsy]

Hello YellowStars,

Thanks for submitting your map! I've come to inform you that this map will be rejected.

When you make a map, make sure to have a theme and a build according to that. Use more variety in your jumps as well, so not only normal block jumps or headhitters. Do not over use barriers either, only use where necessary. Like others pointed out before me, the course is a bit confusing, so make sure to work on that. Other than that, I do see that you have great potential, so keep on practicing building maps!

Thanks again for submitting, we'd love to see another map sometime soon, so don't hesitate on making and submitting another one.
Also, if you have any questions or concerns, just PM me here on the forums or on Discord.

Submission format: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/
List of current maps/themes: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/#post-73063
Map difficulty guide: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/map-difficulty-guide.16797/