Rejected Eacyim's Iron and Coal Parkour Map (MineVast Creative Server)

[Eacyim]

Hey, Im Eacyim and i would like to submit this parkour map. I made this map on the MineVast Creative Server and It is my first map. As my first map for MineVast, It may not be good enough, but here is some information: It is about 40-43 jumps and has 4 checkpoints. I'd put it under medium because the jumps are to hard for easy, even if its only 40-43 jumps. Its on my 4th plot, by the way.

 

[PrestonTheSlime]

Hello Eacyim,
Your map has been Denied for the following reasons:
Theme: The theme (iron and coal) is far too generic and boring. We like maps with detail and creativity
Jumps: The jump difficulty was appropriate for medium but the amount of jumps was like 5-10 short of being a nice Medium. The only two types of parkour were banner and block which is a bit mild. Try adding in more different types of parkour (ice, fence, etc.).
Integration: The theme wasn't really a map in which you could integrate parkour with the theme as it was all floating blocks of two types. Try having a build in your theme that you can just combine your parkour into to make a nice map.
If you wish to improve upon your map and resubmit you are welcome to do so.
Thank you for your submission,
~Preston