Rejected Easy - CandyStore

[spacecat1203]

My username is Spacecat1203
Map name is CandyStore
Plot ID -71;120
This map is easy
The number of jumps is about 20-22
Here is a photo

 

[carvhes]

Nice build, but not my favorite parkour. The map feels short, maybe because it's only 14 jumps. I would also like the see more variety in the type of jumps you have, maybe some mine cart jump or some pod jumps. Looks really nice!! -1

 

[spacecat1203]

Nice build, but not my favorite parkour. The map feels short, maybe because it's only 14 jumps. I would also like the see more variety in the type of jumps you have, maybe some mine cart jump or some pod jumps. Looks really nice!! -1

There are actually a few more jumps hidden behing the building.

 

[sapqhire]

Hello Spacecat1203,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is original, but the build could use some improvements. I would recommend trying to have more focus on the building and having the parkour incorporated into that, rather than having most of it outside. It does look a bit messy and it's hard to tell exactly what the build is.
The parkour is quite repetitive. Try to experiment with different blocks and items, as well as the way you utilize these, to create more original and enjoyable jumps.
The length and difficulty are good for an easy map.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.