Rejected Enchanting table - hard/medium - gjert1

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Hayleyx

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Hey there!

Sadly this theme is unoriginal D:
The build itself is 3D pixel art which is not allowed. You do have some detail regarding the blocks chosen (there's more than one block used and not just once set block colour). Try adding more detail and texture to future builds so that they aren't pixel art. Adding a main island with your main build will make detailing and adding texture a lot easier and will bring the build together.
The parkour itself is the length of an easy map but has an inconsistent difficulty. The map would need to be longer to be a harder difficulty (medium/hard for example). There are a few jumps that are at a harder difficulty than others. Try keeping your difficulty consistent throughout. The only jumps used are ladder jumps. Try adding more variance such as heads, ice, fences, glass panes etc to make the parkour more enjoyable.

I hope this helps!
 

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Hi there gjert1,

Im sorry to tell ya your map has been rejected.

The THEME is unoriginal we have quite a few maps based around minecraft blocks.

The BUILD does have a main build and does have quite of bit of detailing which is lovely to see. Perhaps adding a bit more detailing on the main build and texturing the outside would be the finishing touch.

The PARKOUR is quite repetitive and lacking in varation. It does fit the length of an easy map, but the parkour is also inconsistent, try to use more variation such as chests, fences, water, etc as hayley stated above !

Thank you for the submission, I hope to see more from you. Have a wonderful day !
 
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