Hello,
Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission. Here is my input:
Theme: The theme is original, as we do not have any maps centered around the Relativity drawing, so nice job there.
Build: The build looks really nice, and is very accurate to the theme. I saw you posting in the forums about making small people, but I had no idea that the green things were in fact supposed to be humans - a redesign of those could be nice, or maybe specifying somewhere what they are supposed to be (unless you did and I missed it).
Parkour: The parkour was the proper length of a HARD map but definitely fit the difficulty of an EXPERT. I would increase the number of jumps to make it somewhere between 80-100 jumps or nerf the parkour to fit the HARD category better. A lot of your parkour was quite frustrating to play, as there were headhitter neups (definitely none of those on a HARD map), long ladder jumps (specifically the ladder jumps where you had to go around the glass pane or the one with the closed iron trapdoors), and a slew of iron trapdoor jumps that were quite difficult and annoying to time. I recommend decreasing the amount of iron trapdoor open/close jumps as there were quite a few of them for such a short submission, and they drastically decreased my enjoyment with your map. With that being said, the parkour was varied and definitely wasn't boring to play - I like how most of the jumps were different from one another, so great job there.
I'd love to see more submissions from you in the future, and have a great day!
