Rejected F00D Parkour

[LukaDaMaster]

Username; LukaDaMaster
Map Name; F00D Parkour

Warp to my plot with; /plot v -46;41
Difficulty; Medium
# of Jumps; Around 80 (Ladder jumps have different ways to do it)
Banned blocks in my parkour?; No, no glass or bars.


This is my F00D parkour. I am aware that there is already a food parkour, but I believe that this could be like a part 2 or something to it. I spent some time on this, and I hope the mods like it! I will be building more parkours, so, you will get a few posts from me! Thank you!
~LukaDaMaster
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[DOUBLEPOST=1528830924,1528830545][/DOUBLEPOST]Um... I am not sure what is going on with my images. I posted all my images on imgur. I will just paste the urls here. Sorry about that...
1) https://imgur.com/a/xg10Fad
2) https://imgur.com/a/eMlWg0Q
3) https://imgur.com/a/STIpv73
4) https://imgur.com/a/ZJ1QFgi
5) https://imgur.com/a/IkrgZjP
6) https://imgur.com/a/7Zcvq0H
7) https://imgur.com/a/pCkuVYE

 

[peachay]

Hi there,
Although the map itself isn't too bad, the theme isn't very original at all, as there far too many food themed parkours. Moreover, I can tell you have put a lot of effort into this, but the overall map isn't very attractive, and the build of the food isn't the best, as they are dotted around furthermore making the map very messy. Although I have not yet tested this map, I can see that you have included a good variety of jumps, but that unfortunately doesn't make up for the map itself. -0

Good luck,
Allie

 

[LukaDaMaster]

Hi there,
Although the map itself isn't too bad, the theme isn't very original at all, as there far too many food themed parkours. Moreover, I can tell you have put a lot of effort into this, but the overall map isn't very attractive, and the build of the food isn't the best, as they are dotted around furthermore making the map very messy. Although I have not yet tested this map, I can see that you have included a good variety of jumps, but that unfortunately doesn't make up for the map itself. -0

Good luck,
Allie

Thank you for your reply. I agree with you, that there are a lot of food themed parkour, so I will try to be more creative and make my own styles in the future! Thank you!

 

[Shinxray]

Hoi LukaDaMaster,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
The theme, like said above is unoriginal because already used a lot. About the parkour, it's really repetitive, confusing (Mazes are the worst thing to add on a parkour), and too long for a medium.
However, I think the build is nice !

Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !