Hello CinokiNoki, BubblesC, lynchiles, lukeeff, and mister_fawkes,
Your map will now be marked as reviewing; this means it is neither accepted or rejected just yet.
The theme is original, well done.
The build is accurate to what you were going for, and overall it is very pleasing to see. There are lots of details all throughout this map and overall it is very well done and executed greatly.
The parkour is the main concern. 70 jumps is quite lengthy for a medium, so we would like the jump count reduced. In addition to this, some areas are a bit hard for a medium, and the checkpoint placement isn't the greatest (these are both in a way related to the length issues.) Overall, reduce the length and make sure your checkpoints are placed better.
You have until one month from now (October 18th) to make these changes; if I have not been notified of changes by this time, your map will automatically be rejected. This thread will now be closed, so please message me either on here or on discord when changes have been made.