Rejected Fantasy Parkour and training

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Builders: Anthony_chan, RedRules_317, XDoodlesNight, NizmaCure
Jumps: More than at least 250
Plot Id: 18:-28
Description:based on a fantasy world and has different areas to practice parkour from block jumps to ladders
 

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Things I think could be improved:
  • The jumps sometimes get repetitive and kinda boring.
  • I don't quite understand the theme? I can see the fantasy part with the castle, but whales, and ships exist.
  • I don't really think its insane, was fairly easy.
Things I liked:
  • The last section was unique and fun (Cake on ice).
  • The builds look pretty cool.
  • There is some variety but still a bit repetitive

I'm neither +1ing nor -1ing this course.

Good luck!
 

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Hey Anthony,
I like the originality of this course and the building is pretty up to standard. :)
However I cannot decide the difficulty of this map, but I think it is more expert than insane.
If you want it to be an insane map - look at maybe adding more jumps and adding more variety of jumps.

Hope this helps. Here for any questions :)
- KiKi [Mapper]
 
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Hey Anthony,
I like the originality of this course and the building is pretty up to standard. :)
However I cannot decide the difficulty of this map, but I think it is more expert than insane.
If you want it to be an insane map - look at maybe adding more jumps and adding more variety of jumps.

Hope this helps. Here for any questions :)
- KiKi [Mapper]
okay there's 196 jumps, but ill make some jumps a bit harder
 

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Hey Anthony,
I am sorry to tell you, but I will reject this course. This does not mean, you cannot resubmit it!
I like the castle and the unique jumps at the end. But the course is confusing, pretty repetitive and I think the theme is a bit messy.
Thank you for submitting this map and I hope to see more in the future!

Shron
 
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