Rejected Finding Light Parkour (Hard Map)

[TheFluttershy]

Hi! Good News, I found out how to get screenshots on my computer! The Parkour I would like to submit is called finding light parkour. It is a parkour in story. It has about 75 jumps, 5 checkpoints, and I think it should be a hard map, but the judges may deside. Sorry most of my screenshots wouldnt work.
The warp is /warp Lights

 

[Billybo10000]

Sadly this map has been rejected!

Reasons for this include:

• You retconned your story multiple times and contradicted what we knew. At the beginning, you said something was guarding the light... So where was that monster? It wasn't in the map... The story also made rather little sense. The only signs basically said "The Warrior goes here."
• Some areas were lacking. The iron cage was literally an iron block box. Wasted potential. A white trash bag... That was the point where I had to stop taking the story and the map seriously.

~ Billy