Hoi Bunstop,
I'll be accepting your map, for the following reasons:
The theme for your map is not really original, as there are already nether maps, and about the theme also being related to in real life objects, it makes it a bit boring and repeated theme.
About the build, it looks appealing and very detailed, on top and the build itself.
About the parkour, it is varied and fits the medium difficulty, maybe sometimes confusing because of the lack of brightness, but other than that it was good.
There was also an impossible jump at the end, but I already fixed it so there is nothing to worry about, just be careful and make a good test next time!
Thanks for making a map, I would love to see more maps from you!