Rejected Flame Atronach - Medium

[CynicalPfouts]

• CynicalPfotus
• Flame Atronach
• /plot visit CynicalPfouts 1
• Difficulty Medium

Large build of Flame Atronach from Elder Scrolls V Skyrim

 

[k_rissy]

Hello CynicalPFouts,

Your map will now be marked as ongoing; I have reviewed your map and it will now be discussed among map judges. This may take time, so please be patient.

 

[fribe]

woah this is so good?? best of luck to you!

 

[carvhes]

Sick build! I would probably make the horns a little bit longer since they are pretty long in-game. Other than that, +1 from me!

 

[CynicalPfouts]

Horns are now longer

 

[k_rissy]

Hello CynicalPFouts,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, well done.
The build is accurate to what you were going for with some nice details throughout.
The parkour is the main concern. There is a lack of directions, which can make your parkour more difficult if players do not know where to go. Make sure you add these directional indicators (signs, heads, carpets, etc.) You have some different jumps in your map, which is good; however, some of these jumps are unnecessary (anvils, enchantment tables, luck vines, etc.) Make sure that you find the balance between repetitive parkour and "jump vomit." Try to use less ladders as well. Your map mostly fit a medium, but there were a few difficult areas that will be identified below.

Spoiler: Jumps

In addition to this, the start of your parkour is more than 35 blocks below your starting area, which is not allowed. This is a simple fix by moving your starting platform.

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!