Rejected Flight of the Ancients Expert pk map

[Bushy]

this map is fairly short, but the jump difficulty makes up for that. It is located at /warp FlightoftheAncients.
Made by Pqndah

Ranked Expert.
And has 3 checckpoints.

 

[Tenshi]

Hello, My name is Tenshi and I am here to give you some tips about your parkour map.
Firstly, Theme.
This map has a nice "Hot-Air Balloon" theme to it, I dont see the theme of "ancients". Maybe try to make a pirate ship and some floating islands, acting like a sky battle maybe?
Secondly, Parkour.
View this thread here for help with jumps: http://www.minecraftforum.net/forum...tive-mode/369499-parkour-creation-tips-tricks

Thirdly, Rank.
I think that this map could pull off a hard rank, But if you change things to make the theme fit more, Easily an expert.

Thank you for taking time to create a map, Ill let @Billybo10000 and @ham562 give you some feedback.
Best Regards,
Tenshi.

 

[Bushy]

@Tenshi the theme was hot air balloons and stuff, i could really think of a name, Flight sounded cool, and then hot air balloons are kind of old but meh. Just a quick name on the spot made up

 

[Pud96]

Hello, My name is Tenshi and I am here to give you some tips about your parkour map.
Firstly, Theme.
This map has a nice "Hot-Air Balloon" theme to it, I dont see the theme of "ancients". Maybe try to make a pirate ship and some floating islands, acting like a sky battle maybe?
Secondly, Parkour.
View this thread here for help with jumps: http://www.minecraftforum.net/forum...tive-mode/369499-parkour-creation-tips-tricks

Thirdly, Rank.
I think that this map could pull off a hard rank, But if you change things to make the theme fit more, Easily an expert.

Thank you for taking time to create a map, Ill let @Billybo10000 and @ham562 give you some feedback.
Best Regards,
Tenshi.

Tenshi the theme could fit at a steam punk

 

[Tenshi]

@Tenshi the theme was hot air balloons and stuff, i could really think of a name, Flight sounded cool, and then hot air balloons are kind of old but meh. Just a quick name on the spot made up

Tenshi the theme could fit at a steam punk

I just gave you some tips haha, I never said it couldn't be what it is.

 

[Pud96]

I just gave you some tips haha, I never said it couldn't be what it is.

I know that is what i am saying xD

 

[Bushy]

Aha lol
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Tenshi the theme could fit at a steam punk

that is what i was aiming for kind of steampunkish

 

[Tenshi]

that is what i was aiming for kind of steampunkish

Ahh ok. Maybe take the hot-air-balloons away and make clock/gears?

 

[Pud96]

air balloons are steampunk xd

 

[Bushy]

ahaha. Clocks and gears does sound really cool though that may be my next map thanks for idea tenshi <3 but yeah i agreewith pud, the airballloons are steampunky kind of.

Ahh ok. Maybe take the hot-air-balloons away and make clock/gears?

 

[Tenshi]

ahaha. Clocks and gears does sound really cool though that may be my next map thanks for idea tenshi <3 but yeah i agreewith pud, the airballloons are steampunky kind of.

:3

 

[Bushy]

:3

well of couse.. unless you want to do that map

 

[ham562]

Hello, Bushy!

Your Map has met all the basic requirements to be considered for being put in our Server!

It will be put in the Reviewing Stage!

I will update you soon, with the result!

-TheHam562
(Good luck)

 

[ham562]

Sorry, but this map has been Rejected.

Here is why:

• It is very close to being accepted, but i got lost.

Suggestions:

• Just give more direction, and resubmit. And, it will prob be accepted

As always, you an always resubmit a map!
-TheHam562