Rejected Floating Castle - Hard

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piebrian5

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The build looks good but unfortunately it is unoriginal. The are already other castle maps for example castle (insane), and floating maps or floating island maps are very overused and unoriginal. Good luck!
 

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I'd have to rate this one a -1, based on a few things:

A lot of the parkour itself isn't built around the actual building. In other words, its floating.

Second, the theme castle, as @piebrian5 said before, has already been used. I'd recommend checking the list of current maps before making one.

I will give you the fact that it does seem to fit the difficulty. I just need that the parkour itself needs a little work, as well as the theme.
 

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Hello flal1,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't original, as there are already a few maps based around the castle theme. I would recommend reading the document linked in this thread https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original.
The build is good, it's simple but has a good amount of detail, and fits the theme.
The parkour is quite repetitive. There are a lot of sections that have mainly normal blocks, ladders and fences. I would suggest experimenting with a larger variety of blocks and items when building jumps, it will make your map overall more enjoyable to complete.
There are a lot of floating jumps. Please try to implement the parkour more into the build, rather than having it float over the void and around the build, this can make the map look quite messy.
The length is good for a hard map, and the difficulty suits a medium with a couple hard difficulty jumps.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
 
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