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Heyo! Imma keep this one short since there's not much for me to comment on that hasn't been said, but here are my thoughts!
THEME:
The theme isn't unique, as we have tons of plant and garden-themed maps.
BUILD:
The build feels very basic and is dominated by pixel art of flowers. The rose at the end is nice, I'll give you that, but the rest is boring and quite basic. It also has no real main build.
PARKOUR:
The parkour is easy, repetitive, boring and is entirely floating. To me, I think the whole of the parkour needs a reworking.
I hate to say it, but I think you're just gonna have to go back to the drawing board. Unless you can completely change this map, you might need to just start over. Maybe try doing a specific garden (e.g The Secret Garden?) for the theme, get a main build and better parkour to fix this map, but sadly, I think you just have to scrap the idea. Nonetheless, I wish you good luck with your future submissions!
THEME:
The theme isn't unique, as we have tons of plant and garden-themed maps.
BUILD:
The build feels very basic and is dominated by pixel art of flowers. The rose at the end is nice, I'll give you that, but the rest is boring and quite basic. It also has no real main build.
PARKOUR:
The parkour is easy, repetitive, boring and is entirely floating. To me, I think the whole of the parkour needs a reworking.
I hate to say it, but I think you're just gonna have to go back to the drawing board. Unless you can completely change this map, you might need to just start over. Maybe try doing a specific garden (e.g The Secret Garden?) for the theme, get a main build and better parkour to fix this map, but sadly, I think you just have to scrap the idea. Nonetheless, I wish you good luck with your future submissions!
Hello Zeventy7 & Bernici,
Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't very original, as there are many maps related to nature/floating islands. Please refer to the document in this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original.
The build isn't great as it is quite simple - mainly consisting of pixel art flowers. In the future, try to have one or two main builds for your map, that are larger and have a more shape/depth/detail.
The parkour is quite repetitive, as for the most part it is made up of ladders & normal blocks. Try to experiment with the blocks/items you use when building parkour, as well as the way you utilise these, as this will make your map overall more enjoyable to complete.
The difficulty is good for an easy map, and the length is good fro a medium map.
I would also recommend reading over this article from our wiki, for some more tips on building maps - https://manacube.wiki/parkour/making-maps/parkour-maps
Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't very original, as there are many maps related to nature/floating islands. Please refer to the document in this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original.
The build isn't great as it is quite simple - mainly consisting of pixel art flowers. In the future, try to have one or two main builds for your map, that are larger and have a more shape/depth/detail.
The parkour is quite repetitive, as for the most part it is made up of ladders & normal blocks. Try to experiment with the blocks/items you use when building parkour, as well as the way you utilise these, as this will make your map overall more enjoyable to complete.
The difficulty is good for an easy map, and the length is good fro a medium map.
I would also recommend reading over this article from our wiki, for some more tips on building maps - https://manacube.wiki/parkour/making-maps/parkour-maps
Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
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