Rejected Fly Me to the Moon-Easy

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Built by: AXYH, cripsy_jpeg

Map Name: Fly Me to the Moon

AXYH and cripsy_jpeg built this course based on the lyrics of the song "Fly Me to the Moon" by Frank Sinatra.

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Plot Warp: /plot v AXYH 1

Difficulty: Easy

Number of jumps: 34
 

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Hello AXYH and cripsy_jpeg,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is a bit unoriginal as we have several space related maps, including a moon. Before creating a map, please make sure that the theme has not already been done before by going here.
The build is a bit plain, mostly because the main build is so small and has several smaller structures scattered everywhere. Try using as few builds as possible, and make sure your main build has a lot more detail.
The parkour is repetitive throughout, so please make sure you use other types of jumps throughout your entire map! This may include; water, lava, heads, vines, trapdoors, flower pots, and many other different types of jumps depending on your theme. Also try to make sure your parkour is attached to your build; if it's just floating, it looks very messy. The parkour is good for the easy difficulty.

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
 
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