Rejected GameBoy

[MCBYT]

Username - MCBYT
Map name - GameBoy
The # of your Plot / or warp name to it - /plot tp MCBYT
Difficulty - Medium (on the harder side)
Number of jumps - 47 (minimum)

Photos:

Wide front view, outside (includes game cartridges)

Close-up front view, outside

Bottom, inside

Top, inside

Top, outside

 

[Sketchinqq]

Hey!
The theme is original; i like the build
the parkour is a tiny bit repetitive in my opinion but i dunno i'm not
a good judger of parkour xd
prob a +1 from me
uwu

 

[Presidenten]

Original theme, even though we got some console maps already
Build is accurate but I don't like the block choice, you should replace the stone with quartz, wool or clay. (it looks much better in your texture pack than it does with the normal one)
Parkour is bad, it is a little too hard for medium and there are too many ladder jumps, and most jumps are repetitive.
I give it a 0 for now, good luck!

 

[MCBYT]

Original theme, even though we got some console maps already
Build is accurate but I don't like the block choice, you should replace the stone with quartz, wool or clay. (it looks much better in your texture pack than it does with the normal one)
Parkour is bad, it is a little too hard for medium and there are too many ladder jumps, and most jumps are repetitive.
I give it a 0 for now, good luck!

I'll try to see what I can do about the repetitiveness and the textures. The difficulty seems fine to me though, at least for me this parkour is easier than some mediums I've done, and shorter as well. I'll see if I can cut down on some of the neos though.

 

[MCBYT]

Original theme, even though we got some console maps already
Build is accurate but I don't like the block choice, you should replace the stone with quartz, wool or clay. (it looks much better in your texture pack than it does with the normal one)
Parkour is bad, it is a little too hard for medium and there are too many ladder jumps, and most jumps are repetitive.
I give it a 0 for now, good luck!

Alright. I've replaced the diorite/andesite with light grey and gray wool, respectively, so it'll look the same throughout most texture packs.
I removed the neos and some of the 4 block jumps to make it a tad easier, and I removed about half the ladder jumps (which also cut down on the repetitiveness, but there are still some parts I need to fix)

 

[AlfieJay]

Hey MCBYT

Unfortunately your map has been REJECTED. This is because the theme is unoriginal as there are many console style maps already being used. On top of that the parkour is very flat up against a wall all the time and doesn't really incorporate the actual build which is what a good map needs to do in order to stay interesting. However the parkour was varied and the build was accurate. Thanks for submitting and I hope to see more submissions from you in the future :D