Rejected Goddard- Easy

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OMG NOSTALGIA TRIP!

<not your official review> I will be giving this a +1. The theme is original as we have no Jimmy Neutron maps. The build is well-done and accurate to the original thing. The parkour has some floating jumps, and could use some more variety, but I believe it fits the difficulty.

I wish you the best of luck! <3
 

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Hello TOOCH447,

Unfortunately I will be Rejecting this map.
As mentioned above, the theme is very original and the build was well done. However the parkour wasn't that great. The jumps were quite repetitive mainly consisting of normal blocks, ladders and fences. I would recommend using a larger variety of blocks and items when creating jumps.
There were also a lot of floating jumps. Try implementing the parkour more into the build rather than having them floating around the build. When jumps are floating it can come across as messy and makes the map look less attractive.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
 
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