Rejected Going back Home - Expert

[bkluk]

Username: bkluk
Map Name: GoingBackHome
Pictures:
Plot: -82, 62
Warp: /plot visit bkluk
or: /plot visit bkluk 1
Difficulty: Expert
Jumps: 99 or 100
Checkpoints: 4

 

[bkluk]

Edit: I mirrored the end(forest and house) so it wouldn't be seen from the start of the parkour.

 

[Uneasilly // Sil]

Hey bkluk,

Unfortunately, I'm gonna have to reject your map.

The theme is somewhat original as we don't have any maps exactly like this one. The build could be better. You have a lot of floating pillars in your map that don't match the theme and are a bit confusing. The house at the end is quite small but looks decent. Next time you make a map, try to make a main build and incorporate the parkour within the build more, instead of having floating pillars with jumps around the build. You mainly used normal blocks for the parkour, try to use some more block variety to create more original and enjoyable jumps. Some parts of the parkour fit the expert difficulty nicely, but you also have some parts in the map where the jumps are better suited for the medium or hard difficulty. Even though it's nice to have some variety of jumps, try to balance the course a bit more! The length of your map fits the expert difficulty decently, so good job on that!

Thank you for submitting this map, I'd love to see more maps from you!
Have a great day,
Sil