Rejected Green light, Red light - Easy

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Mr_HiboFish

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Diffculty: Easy
Jumps: 40
Checkpoints: 4
Map by: Mr_HiboFish
/plot tp Mr_HiboFish 1

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This is the doll from Squid Game.
 

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Hello Mr_HiboFish,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, well done.
The build is a concern. Overall, it is very flat and not designed/textured very well. The face especially needs to be redone.
The parkour has a ton of fake variation (random jumps used to make it less repetitive, but end up being a hindrance.) Please try to limit the amount of jumps you use. There is a well-made article on how to have a perfect amount of variance in your map:
https://manacube.com/threads/basics-parkour-variance-and-self-constraint.78459/
The difficulty of this map is inconsistent, overall being too hard for an easy.

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
 
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