Rejected Halo Elite (Sangheili) - Medium [Resubmit]

[Aeris16]

Makers: Aeris16 (build), Rozarioh (Parkour), bomberboy124 (Parkour), actionman1008 (Builder), Cryzophylax (Tester)
Map Name: Halo Elite (Sangheili)
Plot Name: /plot tp Aeris16 1 or /plot tp arbiter
Difficulty: Medium
Tags (cuz I forgot to): Halo, Videogame: Halo, Alien

Images keep bugging out but its a resubmit... so I don't think that's the biggest concern.

 

[Hayleyx]

Hello!

Sorry for the late response.
Unfortunately, your map is being REJECTED.
The theme is original, so good job on that!

Comparing your build to reference photos, it is hard to tell what it is. The overall shaping of the map needs to be improved. There needs to be some overall bulkiness in the leg area, in turn leading to the rest of the body needing shaping to keep it all proportional. In addition, the face needs reshaping.

The first half of the map flows well and was fun, so good job on that! Sadly, from the shoulder onwards, the parkour lost flow and felt clunky.

We hope to see more maps from you in the future.

Have a good day/night
-Hayley