Rejected Heaven (Parkour Map Submission)

[Cyber_Monkey128]

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[Cyber_Monkey128]

Medium Difficulty.


Download Link: I don't have it yet.

 

[Tenshi]

Hello dear parkourist! My name is Tenshi and Im going to leave you some tips and comments about your parkour.
I will also state wiether or not I think it should be accepted, rejected, or reviewed.

Firstly, Theme.
I feel that this theme is clear. You tried to pull off a parkour as Heaven or of a higher realm.

Secondly, Parkour.
View this thread here for help with jumps: http://www.minecraftforum.net/forum...tive-mode/369499-parkour-creation-tips-tricks

Thirdly, Rank.
This parkour would be ranked easy because of the jumps, But some of the ice jumps (Actually, Most jumps ) can be skipped with /speed. Test your parkour jumps before submitting it please!

And Lastly, My comment.
This parkour should or should not be denied.
Reasons Why:
- We have alot of Heaven parkours, And alot of them lack detail. This ones lacks detail.
- The jumps aren't heaven related
- The build is plain

Thank you for submitting a parkour, Remember that this is not a final decision. The final decision will be made by someone higher than myself. Ill let my fellow friends and parkour map makers, @Nixi and @Pud96 give you some comments.

Thank you for your time. If this parkour is accepted/rejected, Remember that you can always submit another parkour, at another time.


~Tenshi

 

[Lamont]

There's already a heaven parkour alot better than this one

 

[Cyber_Monkey128]

Hello dear parkourist! My name is Tenshi and Im going to leave you some tips and comments about your parkour.
I will also state wiether or not I think it should be accepted, rejected, or reviewed.

Firstly, Theme.
I feel that this theme is clear. You tried to pull off a parkour as Heaven or of a higher realm.

Secondly, Parkour.
View this thread here for help with jumps: http://www.minecraftforum.net/forum...tive-mode/369499-parkour-creation-tips-tricks

Thirdly, Rank.
This parkour would be ranked easy because of the jumps, But some of the ice jumps (Actually, Most jumps ) can be skipped with /speed. Test your parkour jumps before submitting it please!

And Lastly, My comment.
This parkour should or should not be denied.
Reasons Why:
- We have alot of Heaven parkours, And alot of them lack detail. This ones lacks detail.
- The jumps aren't heaven related
- The build is plain

Thank you for submitting a parkour, Remember that this is not a final decision. The final decision will be made by someone higher than myself. Ill let my fellow friends and parkour map makers, @Nixi and @Pud96 give you some comments.

Thank you for your time. If this parkour is accepted/rejected, Remember that you can always submit another parkour, at another time.


~Tenshi

Okay I'm gonna make another parkour thanks for the advice

 

[Parkour build pro]

kinda boring parkour m8

 

[Cyber_Monkey128]

Please forget this level and see our NEW Map: http://forums.minevast.com/threads/pandamonium-map-submission-medium-or-hard.5174/#post-23605

 

[Angel_Scarz]

There are already 2 heaven parkours

 

[gogre]

Denied