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Loading Status...Rejected Hello Kitty Resubmission - Medium
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so i'm giving you a +0.5 c:
Theme: it's original, not much to say about it, it's good. +1
Build: it's decent, the rainbow and flower definitely make it better but the kitty itself is kinda blocky. maybe try rounding the arms a bit at the shoulders and i'll change my build review. +0.5
Parkour: I haven't tested it but from the pictures it's definitely improved, you've got block jumps, fences, ladders, panes, trapdoors, walls, slime, and probably more. looks great c: +1
the only way to improve this (in my opinion) would be to make the kitty itself look less blocky, but other than that, it's great and I wish you good luck c:
Theme: it's original, not much to say about it, it's good. +1
Build: it's decent, the rainbow and flower definitely make it better but the kitty itself is kinda blocky. maybe try rounding the arms a bit at the shoulders and i'll change my build review. +0.5
Parkour: I haven't tested it but from the pictures it's definitely improved, you've got block jumps, fences, ladders, panes, trapdoors, walls, slime, and probably more. looks great c: +1
the only way to improve this (in my opinion) would be to make the kitty itself look less blocky, but other than that, it's great and I wish you good luck c:
Hi dorothy2191 !
Unfortunately, we will be rejecting this map. Firstly, the theme is original as there has never been a Hello-Kitty related map before, but the build is a bit messy and slightly unattractive to look at. While the parkour length fits the difficulty, some jumps were too hard for the medium difficulty, as well as a few impossible jumps, I also I can't help but notice that it's a bit repetitive as well as slightly confusing, and a lot of it floating.
In the future, we recommend attaching more of the parkour onto the build, rather than leaving it floating, as it can make the map look messy, and overall confusing, we'd also recommend going through and testing all the jumps after you've created your maps, to prevent getting too difficult, or even impossible jumps.
Thank you for taking the time to create, and submit this map, and we'd love to see more from you in the future!
Luci & Madi
Unfortunately, we will be rejecting this map. Firstly, the theme is original as there has never been a Hello-Kitty related map before, but the build is a bit messy and slightly unattractive to look at. While the parkour length fits the difficulty, some jumps were too hard for the medium difficulty, as well as a few impossible jumps, I also I can't help but notice that it's a bit repetitive as well as slightly confusing, and a lot of it floating.
In the future, we recommend attaching more of the parkour onto the build, rather than leaving it floating, as it can make the map look messy, and overall confusing, we'd also recommend going through and testing all the jumps after you've created your maps, to prevent getting too difficult, or even impossible jumps.
Thank you for taking the time to create, and submit this map, and we'd love to see more from you in the future!
Luci & Madi
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