Rejected helloo2000 - The Winter Cabin - Difficulty Medium

[helloo2000]

Name of the Map: The Winter Cabin
Plot Owner: helloo2000
Builder: helloo2000
Difficulty: Medium
ID: -102 -64
Jumps: 38 (3 Checkpoints)
Description: Feel free to change anything you want, hope you like it and I hope for you to put it on the server. P.S Here are the pictures, hope they're enough and most of the effort went inside the build not outside.

 

[k_rissy]

Hello helloo2000,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is unoriginal, as we already have several maps with a similar theme to this (IcyLodge, CelestialResort) as well as several winter themed maps in general. Before creating a map, please make sure that the theme has not already been done before by going here: https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/
The build (for the cabin) could be better with some more details on the outside. The inside does have a bit of detail, so good job on that! The cabin could also benefit from generally being bigger so you have more room for these details.
The parkour is floating throughout a majority of the course (meaning it isn't attached to the main build) which makes it appear messy. It would also be better if your parkour is centered around the actual cabin itself, as opposed to only starting off that way. There is a small amount of variety to be seen throughout, but the parkour does get quite repetitive within each section, so try to incorporate different jump styles throughout your entire map! The length of the course is good for the medium difficulty; however, the jumps are a bit easy.

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina