Rejected Hot Chocolate - Medium

[Reblz]

Username x_Rebelz_x
Map Name: Hot Chocolate
Jumps: 42
/plot visit x_Rebelz_x

 

[MCBYT]

-1. The build isn't bad, but it's very similar to Mug by Aloro (easy map, second page). The theme has the same issue. The parkour is a good difficulty and length, but it's a fair bit repetitive.

 

[Reblz]

-1. The build isn't bad, but it's very similar to Mug by Aloro (easy map, second page). The theme has the same issue. The parkour is a good difficulty and length, but it's a fair bit repetitive.

Thank you for your feedback, I’ll try and change some of the jumps so it is less repetitive. For the future, I’ll try and think of a better theme.

 

[sapqhire]

Hello x_Rebelz_x,

Unfortunately I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't that original, as there is a very similar map already (Mug- Easy) In the future, I'd suggest reading this thread https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ so you can check whether your theme is original or not.
The build isn't bad, it could use a bit more detailing with the colours, but overall it's accurate to the theme.
The parkour is a bit repetitive. I would suggest experimenting with a wider variety of blocks and items when building jumps so your parkour has more variety.
The length was good for a medium, the difficulty of the parkour might be a bit easy for a medium though.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future!

 

[LeiSkule]

I would remove the floating pk if i were you