Hello Ninjeygaming, I am sorry to say your map is being rejected.
Theme: The theme is unoriginal, maps such as house exist already, and it resembles most of the other story/adventure themed maps such as TaleOfTwo and Biomes.
Build: The build is very simplistic, and although it gets the theme across it’s not very attractive, the build needs a lot of improvement to set it apart from any of the existing house/building maps.
Parkour: The parkour was, again, basic, it had no variation and took virtually no effort to complete, the addition of jump variation and block experimentation could help improve your parkour making skills.
Difficulty: The difficulty was closest to an easy map, however, I feel it was far too easy for even that. The 20 jumps minimum is better suited for the harder easy maps, and I feel increasing the length and jump difficulty could have helped here.
Thanks for taking the time to submit your map, hopefully, you will submit more in the future!
Have a good day, and happy map building- Cele <3