Rejected Icicle Adventure

[sirted47]

Username: sirted47
Map name: Icicle Adventure
The # of your Plot / or warp name to it: 22;-57
Difficulty: Hard (or medium depending on what you guys decide)
Number of jumps: 81
Photos of your Parkour:

 

[Blurpyfied]

too many floating jumps and unoriginal -1

 

[sirted47]

too many floating jumps and unoriginal -1

Im sorry that this does not fit in your category of parkour

 

[Tas]

Im sorry that this does not fit in your category of parkour

I'd suggest being receptive to criticism.

I like the build (the icicles look good) although there are quite a few floating jumps. Maybe you could have less actual ice jumps and more jumps that are built with that palette (blues and whites). Good luck!

 

[LordSpectilas]

I love the effort you put into it, the icicles look really good! But, unfortunately, the theme is pretty unoriginal and I'm pretty sure there's actually a map that incorporates icicles already.
Like said above, I suggest putting less floating jumps and less ice jumps. Good work though!

 

[Shinxray]

Hoi sirted47,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
The theme, like said above, is not original, there is already some map with the same theme as yours, please try to found a better theme next time ! The build is not really good, it's really messy, because there is a lot of floating jumps, please try to build your parkour on/in a (main) build. The parkour is not really good too, it's pretty repetitive (A lot of ice and normal jumps, and a lot of same jump like the first ladder tower). It's also pretty long for a medium, but maybe too easy for a hard.

Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !