Rejected Impending Injury - Hard (revised x2)

[Cashisgr8]

-Cashisgr8
-Impending Injury

Previous 2 threads:
#2
https://www.manacube.com/threads/impending-injury-hard-revised.52916/
#1
https://www.manacube.com/threads/impending-injury-hard.52652/

Updates:
-Adjustments to parkour
-Wall has more depth
-Person is wearing knee pads and elbow pads
-Skateboard wheels look more like wheels
-Better sign placement
-Helmet chinstrap looks more realistic
-Added text in the background; makes the build feel comical

/plot v Cashisgr8 3

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[ThePKFish]

Hello Cash,

I am sorry to inform you that this course is being rejected. As said for the previous submissions, the parkour is fine and definitely varied. However, the build still isn't up to par. I like the idea of the words, but they make the build look very messy. In addition to this, the build itself could be improved. I like your effort with the bricks, but that was not exactly the main focus of the problems with the build. The build itself could just be made more detailed, rather than the depth of the wall. I do think the theme is creative. However, if you wish to stick with it, I suggest building another course that has the detail asked. Overall, the parkour is nice but the build overall would need to be changed, as stated before.

Thank you for submitting this map!
If you have any questions, you may DM on here, in game, or on discord!

-Ashley (ThePKFish, fishy1980)