Rejected Insane wood pk with 200 jumps

[xBejja]

hey guys
my pk has:

-about 200 jumps
-9 checkpoints

This parkour is 100% possible and contains only wood stuff
I built it myself on the creative server
my ingame name is xBejja
you can do /plot tp xBejja on the creative server to try it

I spent a LOT of time to build pk so I hope you like it! :3

 

[DaTNTBoy]

This parkour has no excitement in it, its just basic wood and fence jumps in a spiral.

 

[SwiftLee]

This parkour looks cool from the screenshots, but I think your just need to add a theme and a purpose to your jumps. Otherwise, you spent your time well.

 

[Billybo10000]

Your map has been rejected.

Reasons for this include:

• This parkour is cruel. The start of any insane parkour should be easy enough for players to get through, so they can rage at later sections. Your interpretation of a start is to put all of the hardest possible parkour jumps in one space and ask players to get through the gauntlet. It's demoralizing. Every insane course has relief jumps that allow the player a small break from the rage inducing pain and suffering.
• The theme is weak. Insane wood parkour... It's a spiral of wooden blocks. We already have a similar parkour in the Random Blocks Insane course that uses the same sort of spiral pattern, but works with a unqiue theme. Wood is not a great theme, since it's associated with most people's worst maps, since in my experience, I've seen many people make wood spirals... It's just not an original theme at all...

~ Billy

 

[xBejja]

Your map has been rejected.

Reasons for this include:

• This parkour is cruel. The start of any insane parkour should be easy enough for players to get through, so they can rage at later sections. Your interpretation of a start is to put all of the hardest possible parkour jumps in one space and ask players to get through the gauntlet. It's demoralizing. Every insane course has relief jumps that allow the player a small break from the rage inducing pain and suffering.
• The theme is weak. Insane wood parkour... It's a spiral of wooden blocks. We already have a similar parkour in the Random Blocks Insane course that uses the same sort of spiral pattern, but works with a unqiue theme. Wood is not a great theme, since it's associated with most people's worst maps, since in my experience, I've seen many people make wood spirals... It's just not an original theme at all...

~ Billy

ok thanks for your feedback