Rejected Japanses Shrine parkour Hard

[xXxawesm325xXx]

Name of the map: Japanese shrine
Name of the creator: xXxawesm325xXx
Positon: Map maker world #1 on my plot
Difficulty: Hard
Jumps: 70
Checkpoints: 4

 

[Dark_GoldX15]

+1 the parcour is pretty fun and the theme is really good in my opinion

 

[EPGaming]

There could've been a little more efford in making the shrine itself not look like a box, but the overal pk was fine. I'll stay neutral. 0

 

[xXxawesm325xXx]

There could've been a little more efford in making the shrine itself not look like a box, but the overal pk was fine. I'll stay neutral. 0

As you said, I did built the shrine itself like a gigantic box.And I hope you will accept my apologies.
This is my first submission after the server restarted. So I may not understand the meaning of the map.Art is also a part of it.And sadly, I'm not really good at art.I understand it's not delicate enough. And not as good as your masterpiece.But I'd say I tried my best on this. Maybe I'll change my point of view after a few more map submissions. I hope one day I could build like yours.

P.S. As far as I know, Japanese Shrines are pretty much like a rectangle( temples or shrines I've ever visit):D but yes I'll try to built things better in the future

 

[EPGaming]

As you said, I did built the shrine itself like a gigantic box.And I hope you will accept my apologies.
This is my first submission after the server restarted. So I may not understand the meaning of the map.Art is also a part of it.And sadly, I'm not really good at art.I understand it's not delicate enough. And not as good as your masterpiece.But I'd say I tried my best on this. Maybe I'll change my point of view after a few more map submissions. I hope one day I could build like yours.

P.S. As far as I know, Japanese Shrines are pretty much like a rectangle( temples or shrines I've ever visit):D but yes I'll try to built things better in the future

You're trying and that's what I like. Keep on improving and become a master builder one day like Grian!

 

[AlfieJay]

Name of the map: Japanese shrine
Name of the creator: xXxawesm325xXx
Positon: Map maker world #1 on my plot
Difficulty: Hard
Jumps: 70
Checkpoints: 4

Vote: -1

Response: I wouldn't rank this as a hard map, I would most likely make it a medium. At the moment, there is a way that you can skip out a MASSIVE chunk of the parkour. I originally though this was where you were meant to go because there isn't anything telling you to go behind the shrine, I thought you were meant to go straight onto the fences (which you can do). Also, I'm guessing that the whole idea of the parkour is the view, which is kind of squandered by the floating blocks above the shrine. Also, inside the shrine, there isn't a whole lot of parkour, which is where the most usually would be. On the other hand, I do like the natural-element to it, as well as the colour scheme. (I hope I haven't come off too rudely, BTW :p)

Edit: You also spelt "Japanese" wrong in the title :/

 

[Dubinzi]

-1
Reasons: Default trees, flat terraforming, barriers everywhere

 

[Dark88]

-1 too many barrier and these types of builds has already been made by people

 

[xXxawesm325xXx]

Vote: -1

Response: I wouldn't rank this as a hard map, I would most likely make it a medium. At the moment, there is a way that you can skip out a MASSIVE chunk of the parkour. I originally though this was where you were meant to go because there isn't anything telling you to go behind the shrine, I thought you were meant to go straight onto the fences (which you can do). Also, I'm guessing that the whole idea of the parkour is the view, which is kind of squandered by the floating blocks above the shrine. Also, inside the shrine, there isn't a whole lot of parkour, which is where the most usually would be. On the other hand, I do like the natural-element to it, as well as the colour scheme. (I hope I haven't come off too rudely, BTW :p)

Edit: You also spelt "Japanese" wrong in the title :/

First,I would like to thank your opinions.
And btw I do know I spell Japanese wrong but I can't really change it
Thanks for the report about the shortcut.I'll fix it when I'm available
About the difficulties I'd say yes it is a little bit too easy for a hard.But my friends said It would a little bit hard for medium.
This is my first time to make a map.I will take these opinions and use them in the future.
Thank you very much.I'll try to make it better!
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-1
Reasons: Default trees, flat terraforming, barriers everywhere

Sorry for the designs. I should've make it better!
I'm sorry I built it too small.So barrier will be required to avoid shortcuts.
I will try to fix these problems in the future. Thanks for your precious opinions!
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-1 too many barrier and these types of builds has already been made by people

Sorry about the barriers. I accidently built it too small so barrier will be required:(.
Apologies for causing the inconvenience
About the theme. I originally came up with the idea.I wan't inspired by any of the parkour courses in the server.
If there is already something simular to my courses, I'm very sorry and I'll check all the courses carefully next time to avoid awkward situations like this.
Thank you for your opinions. Your precious opinions will help me become a better builder in the future!:D

 

[Aloro]

Hey,
I am sorry to say but I am going to be rejecting your map submission.
Firstly, I feel like the build is not that appealing compared to some of the Japanese maps we currently have on the server. I also feel like the jumps are too confusing, at times I were not sure where to jump or go. In the map I could also skip quite a few parts due to the lack of barriers.
Thank you for the map submission, I hope to see more in the future!