Rejected JoJo Stands - Easy

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DingusRice

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Username: DingusRice
Map Name: JoJo Stands
Plot #: -104; 104
Difficulty: Easy
Jumps: 43
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Hello DingusRice,

I regret to inform you this map is being rejected. I'm not really sure what the build is of, so it's difficult for me to judge if the theme is original. Including a reference photo next time or some explanation as to what this is from would be helpful! The build is okay, it feels a little plain though. I'd love to see some other blocks used to add shading to some of the organics you've made! I would recommend making only one or two different structures and have the parkour on, attached to, or inside of the build.

The parkour is where this map falls short. It is pretty much all floating, and comprised almost all normal blocks, ice, and ladders. Next time, try to use many different kinds of blocks all throughout your map to make varied and mixed parkour. You can look at recently accepted maps at /warp beta on the server, or in the Accepted maps subforum for visual executions of this!

Thanks for submitting this map! If you have any questions, feel free to message me here on the forums, in-game or on Discord.
 
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