Rejected Jungle Jumps

[silverdestroyr]

Username: silverdestroyr

Map Name: Jungle Jumps

Screenshot of map:

Plot 1

Difficulty: easy/medium

 

[IPattyI]

Hey silverdestroyr,

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.

• Theme: As we have a lot of Jungle-related maps currently on our server, this is a pretty unoriginally themed map submission. I recommend that you look at our list of previously used maps/themes as to prevent such things in the future: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lZKQZMgGev6fXyhZ8nCPkTzNIj0yOjXjUTDvfzKNzl4/edit .
• Build: Personally, I don't think the build is very good. It's just floating leaves and trees. There's no focus on this map, no eye-catching central build. It just looks like a mess, really. Remember that you have to create a central build that portrays your theme accurately, not a bunch of different things all jumbled together.
• Parkour: The parkour fits the easy difficulty in both length and ease. But, I just didn't find it enjoyable to do. It was a bunch of the same jumps over and over again (leaves to leaves and some ladders here and there). You need to be more creative when making parkour, don't be afraid to use a bunch of different jumps/blocks!

I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck!