Rejected Jusenkyo (V2)

[MCBYT]

(Jusenkyo info - https://ranma.fandom.com/wiki/Jusenkyo
Image of Jusenkyo in the anime "Ranma 1/2" - https://1.bp.blogspot.com/_svPQ_U3jni8/RlW0kHZEdiI/AAAAAAAAAAw/-02oeyo0d1M/s400/jusenkyo.jpg)

Username: MCBYT
Map Name: "Jusenkyo"
/plot h MCBYT 1
Easy map.
~30 total jumps.

CHANGES FROM V1 TO V2:
Nerfed half the jumps
Changed a few fence jumps to other types of jumps (for variety)
Added more tree branches
Made tree bases/logs more custom
Added grass/ferns
Made terrain better
Filled springs

(By the way, I checked out RavineVillage, I definitely see the resemblance. Sorry about that.)​

 

[Dubinzi]

Still gonna be a -1 from me.
Starting with positives:

• The parkour itself has improved
• I like the cobweb clouds

Negatives:

• The ground is still plain
• The trees don't look good with random fences branching off of them

Suggestions:

• Fix the springs to look filled (left) instead of empty in the center (right)
• Change the terrain to look more like this
• Change the trees to look more like this (Not an exact copy of this, just make the trees have more personality)

Good luck!

 

[MCBYT]

Still gonna be a -1 from me.
Starting with positives:

• The parkour itself has improved
• I like the cobweb clouds

Negatives:

• The ground is still plain
• The trees don't look good with random fences branching off of them

Suggestions:

• Fix the springs to look filled (left) instead of empty in the center (right)
• Change the terrain to look more like this
• Change the trees to look more like this (Not an exact copy of this, just make the trees have more personality)

Good luck!

I tried to fix it best I can. I suck at trees though, so that's about all I can do (i left one tree default, so they don't all look similar)

 

[Faudon]

Hoi MCBYT,
I'll be rejecting your map, for the following reasons:

The theme for your map is not really original, as there are way too many biomes map, but still there is some originality as there are no "Training Japanese Ground" (?).
About the build, it was a bit plain and boring to see, and when looking the "behind the scenes" of your map, it wasn't a nice thing to see. I would also consider making bigger trees and adding them details, maybe making a waterfall between what it seemed to be mountains.

About the parkour, it was hard for an easy map, and not really balanced, as some of the jumps made fit an easy map, and some others don't. It was also repetitive, even though you used different jumps on top of the fences, and it was also confusing where to go, so I would recommend to fix that for the next one!

Thanks for making a map, I would love to see more maps from you!