Hoi MCBYT,
I’ll be rejecting your map, for the following reasons;
The theme for your map is a bit unoriginal, as there are some Mario maps, and also ‘Kingdede’ that could be considered related to the map you made.
Anyways, it’s still original as there are no Kirby maps.
About the build, it’s not really good looking as it’s just an sphere with arms, with some stars details (even though Kirby is like that).
Something that made the map look messy was the amount of barriers, try reducing that amount of barriers by making the parkour inside the map and not having to worry about it.
About the parkour, there was some variety at the top of the build, but not a lot at the bottom, as you used almost all the same blocks, and made it look boring.
Also at the top, it was a bit confusing due to the structure and organization of your parkour.
You can resubmit your map if you want, if you patch the negative points I told you above, I will be happy to accept it!
Thanks for submitting a map, I would love to see more maps from you!