Rejected Lawn - Easy (updated)

[Emerqld_]

Map name: Lawn
Builder(s): Emerqld_, Herobrineapril, bomberr_
Difficulty: Easy
Number of jumps: 25
Map #: map number on my acc(Emerqld_) is #1. (/plot v Emerqld_ 1)
Pictures of map:

 

[Herobrineapril]

In my unbiased opinion this is the best build ever built :>

 

[ItsMeBaz]

This should be accepted

 

[Hayleyx]

Hello,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
This theme is unoriginal as we already have similar looking maps.

The build itself is quite cute and has some details; however, the platforms off to the side do cause it to look messy. I would remove these and bring the starting platform closer.

The parkour fits the length and difficulty of an easy map, so good job on that!
The parkour however is lacking variance. Add more variance such as glass panes, water, heads, cocoa beans, trapdoors, etc to make the parkour less repetitive and flow better.

We hope to see more maps from you in the future!
Have a wonderful day/night
-Hayley