Rejected Lincoln Memorial - Medium

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The theme is good but the build itself is very bland and looks similar to a number of existing maps (Mansion, Parthenon).
 

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Hello MattTheCutie,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is somewhat original, there are a few maps that are based on famous structures, but none of this exact one.
The build isn't great, the shaping of it is nice, however, it does feel quite plain. I would suggest trying to add a bit more detail with the block variation. I do understand it is quite difficult to change too much when it comes to detail when you are replicating a certain structure/object.
The parkour is very repetitive. You did use a few different styles of jumps which is good, except you did group them a lot. What I mean by this, is you would have a sequence of just ladders, then head jumps etc. Try to mix up your jumps a bit more throughout your map, and experiment with a wider variety of blocks and items, as this will overall make your map more enjoyable to complete.
The difficulty is good for an easy/medium map, but the length is too long. Please refer to this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/ to make sure your map fits within the requirements.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
 
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