Rejected Lollipop Land - Medium

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Username - Dylan3124567
Map Name - Lollipop Land
Warp - Plot 2
Difficulty - Easy or Medium
# of jumps (i am excluding things such as staircases and stepping up blocks) - 52
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Overall a good map, I can tell you put a lot of effort into making areas like Rock Candy Caverns. My only real problem with the map is how inside Rock Candy Caverns there isn't much variety, other than the glass panes. You only really start seeing fences and ladders towards the end of the map. Besides that, good job!
 

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Heya Dylan3124567!
Sadly your map is being rejected!

Firstly, the THEME of your map is unoriginal, as we already have a Lollipop map here on ManaCube; [Lollipop]. When creating a map, try to come up with a theme that is original! A full list of already accepted maps can be found here!

Secondly, the BUILD of your map is lacking in detail and depth. When building a map, be sure to add lots of detail to ensure your map looks good to play on! Make sure that you also create a main build to incorporate parkour within and around! I recommend trying to create a more varied color palette.

Lastly, the PARKOUR of your map fits the easy difficulty, while the length is that of a medium map, try balancing these out! The blocks used within your parkour lack variance, try using different blocks such as ice, trapdoors, heads, flower pots and water to create a more varied parkour experience on your map!

I wish you all the best with future map submissions! [Jash]
If you have any questions feel free to message me on discord at Elly#5555.
Have a great day,
Elly
 
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