Rejected Map Submission - ViewpointPK

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Name: ViewpointPK
Maker: Sir_marshall1504
Difficulty: Medium (45 jumps)
Theme: Large waterfall with viewpoint on top of it.
Plot: /plot tp Sir_marshall1504 2
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Hello Sir_marshall1504,

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The THEME of your map is unoriginal, as we already have maps based around floating islands/waterfalls. Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here to see all the maps accepted on the server!

The BUILD of your map is a problem. The map was entirely made up of floating islands with only a bit of detail added. Next time try considering making one main build with lots of depth and detail that goes with your theme.

The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a medium map, so good job on that! Your parkour has some variance, but most of it is in clumps causing it to still be repetitive. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
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